November 12, 2008

spread 5


does my title work?

2 comments:

Domenico Morrone said...

John, I think the "The" is a little too large in comparison to "contemporary type foundry". I think if you're using the spacial relationship methodology, then the word "Foundry" should technically be the largest. I do find this one hard to work with on my spread as well though.

John Please Stop! said...

hey yeah. iwanted to attract the audience to "THE" first thats why i did that, but i totally change this header. shelly though it was confusing. hehe i just wante it to flow. i guess it didnt work